Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Another imitation poem from dlp-third viewing?

And another masterful effort on your part. Of course, if a person speaks in this manner I would keep a distance of at least two miles, but as an effulgent efflorescence of a true love of language, it makes for great poetic artistry. My one cavil is with "animus." It ends a sentence that is powerful with a weak note. Skip using your bombastic cleverness and just say "soul."

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